Cairus' Artist Statement Assist

Biggie -> Better

Hey Cairus! I think right off the bat you have a really strong artist statement. Your connection to the
uncanny is something that is very present in your work. I think it is really exciting to read what you
have to say about it because of the poetic touch you have in your writing style.On the other hand, do
not be afraid to allow yourself to shine in your writing. I know you are a really bright and colorful person,
and your statement lacks a bit of your spark. As a reader, I am wondering why you are so connected to
these uncanny objects and their connection to the audience Finally on the technical side, you have a
few grammatical errors/run-on sentences scattered throughout it. These are easy fixes though. I
would be more than happy to sit down and go over any of that with you if you need.

Biggie -> Shortie

To trim down your biggie to your shortie, I would use your last paragraph as your starting point..
It is concise and also explains how your work connects to your thought process. I would consider
that to be a great shorty with a couple of grammatical fixes and a bit of bulking up.