Lindsey artist statement assist

Biggie > Better

I found your artist statement to be effective in expressing the purpose of your work. It gave great insight to the aspects of life and artists who influence your practice. One suggestion I had was to discuss the differences in your approach to process in more broad terms. Instead of differences in individual works. I believe it allows us to steer clear of the, some works are like this, while others are like this situation. Your statement was very well refined making this a hard task to find aspects I felt didn't work, excellent job.

Biggie > Shortie

I think I would just rearrange some things. I would place the third paragraph first, then the first paragraph second, fourth paragraph last. I think this would allow you to have a shorter statement, that still flows nicely.